LR-include more references/precise examples on the opening page.Try to include more media theory
References
Retro sexism- http://www.womenactionmedia.org/2012/01/05/cant-turn-it-off-retro-sexism-in-tv-sitcoms/
percentage of female writers- http://www.salon.com/2010/01/11/women_writers_late_night/
For example episode of Big Bang theory Season 1 episode 8- grasshopper experiment
David Gauntlett- "women and men may feel equal but at the same time this may be inaccurate"
Self-evaluation
WWW- Intelligent writing, good argument and good detailed research
EBI- improve on minor grammatical mistakes and more detailed evaluation
Grade- C
References
Retro sexism- http://www.womenactionmedia.org/2012/01/05/cant-turn-it-off-retro-sexism-in-tv-sitcoms/
percentage of female writers- http://www.salon.com/2010/01/11/women_writers_late_night/
For example episode of Big Bang theory Season 1 episode 8- grasshopper experiment
David Gauntlett- "women and men may feel equal but at the same time this may be inaccurate"
Self-evaluation
WWW- Intelligent writing, good argument and good detailed research
EBI- improve on minor grammatical mistakes and more detailed evaluation
Grade- C
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