1) focus more on punctuation- corrected mistakes
2)make reference to hypothesis, include genre key concepts and ideology.- Used in the conclsuion
3)make more reference to political and economic- Not used as i have done on previous pages
4)quote on facts of sit come writers. mention Americanisation/globalisation- used on pervious pages and put a reference on the conclusion fact
5)add institution's, place and put books in alphabetical order- added to the bibliography
6)include more references/precise examples on the opening page.Try to include more media theory-added more for Americanisation and mulvey
2)make reference to hypothesis, include genre key concepts and ideology.- Used in the conclsuion
3)make more reference to political and economic- Not used as i have done on previous pages
4)quote on facts of sit come writers. mention Americanisation/globalisation- used on pervious pages and put a reference on the conclusion fact
5)add institution's, place and put books in alphabetical order- added to the bibliography
6)include more references/precise examples on the opening page.Try to include more media theory-added more for Americanisation and mulvey
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